This is the 3rd iteration of narrative 2.
Based on excellent feedback from my very clever classmates, I have made several changes.
The objective here is, using sequential graphic narrative combined with text, to convey sophisticated data to an unsophisticated demographic. It was pointed out by my classmates and a tutor that they had no idea who the middle duo were, so I have branded these particularly noxious creatures so that those who do not know who they are and, lets face it, the target demographic don’t have a clue, can look them up and, hopefully, learn just what scum they are and what their obscene agenda is. I have also branded the most recognisable of the three characters here with his main quality which, again, the target demographic are probably unaware of. I have also spelled out the blatant military nature of the modern american law industry in the hope that the target demographic will realise the police are now used as an arm of the military industrial complex to subjugate the people and prevent them throwing off the 60 or so billionaires who now control america.